Thread:Adrew34/@comment-1931440-20141227141924

I’m glad you are writing a story, but you should make your own pages. This is nothing like the story I envisioned. Did you even read the main page? I suggest you write your changes down before I undo them tonight. If you want a setting for your own story, try Renaissance Italy, since I'm doing 11th century Eastern Europe  
 * Nadya, Pyotr, and Ivan are supposed to be a platonic (or not) threesome. It’s not a love triangle, so Nadya most certainly does not end up with Pyotr.
 * I’ll let you in on a secret: Little Pyotr asked to be cursed by the Crone, to lose the pain of his parent’s death, and it literally RIPPED his heart out of his chest and turned it to stone. He's looking for the true princess to put it back.
 * Ivan as a villain makes no sense. HOW is a peasant of Gypsy descent going to take over Krepost?
 * The Storm Bird is the main villain, but it’s true (HUMAN) identity is a secret. Let’s just say that there is never any danger of Tsar Vladimir being usurped.